User blog comment:HowILoveIt/When Peace was brought to an end (Chapter 20)/@comment-40063314-20200126213346

Keep it up! Keep it up! Continue this splendid work! I'm liking that we're now getting in on the story (details that explain the events, like how Midori gave a bit of exposition to Matt's actions and Ivo giving a few helpful tips here) and that the action is making more sense (you've put better timing, pace, unpredictability and tension). I look forward to hearing Matt's motives. Best wishes to you and your writing. ⭐⭐⭐⭐