User blog comment:KingFire4IcePowerAAA/When Things Got Unexpected At Wuhu Island (Chapter Four: The Battle Truly Begins)/@comment-40063314-20200126113753

I like the actual dialogue and that you didn't capitalise everything, unlike HowILoveIt (critique here, Alberto, is that even if their lives are at stake, they shouldn't automatically have "Lung Capacity 100"/exclaim every 2 chapters 5 lines at a time (exaggeration to emphasise my point). It feels less serious and more like Toy Story 3's Caterpillar Room).